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Chapter 9
“Now you are totally
relaxed Kate. You are in a safe
place. Do you feel safe Kate?”
“Yes.”
“Tell me about this woman
Kate. Can you describe her to me?”
“I just remember a dark
face, dark hair. When her mouth opened
so far I closed my eyes. As soon as I
did I could tell she was gone.”
“Does she remind you of
anyone, perhaps someone involved in a trauma in your life?”
“No, I have never seen her
before.”
“He is very irritating,
isn’t he?”
“Who?”
“The good doctor.”
“Who is this?”
“I am the one you should
believe in.”
“No.”
“Yes.”
“No. Leave me alone. She’s here, Doctor Riley, she’s here.”
“Tell me about the
dream.”
“No! No!
Wake me up, she’s here!”
“The men in my dream
thought I attacked them.”
“We are alone in here.”
“Did either of the men
look familiar?”
“No, I have never seen
them.”
“I want to wake up.”
“He can’t hear you. We are in another place.”
“Where am I? What are you doing here?”
“What do you think is the
significance of the old west setting?”
“Seemed fitting. You are in yet another place in your little
brain. With me.”
“I don’t know.”
“What do you want from
me?”
“I want you to believe in
me.”
“You said the woman, you,
had blood on her dress. Was she violated
in some way?”
“A little spotting is
expected from the first time. Tell him
you did it with the devil.”
“I had sex with the
devil.”
“Kate, were you raped by
someone? It is completely natural to
block a memory of that.”
“If I showed myself to
him he would lose his simple little mind.
I am easing into you.”
“I don’t want this.”
“Too late, you have been
asking for it for a long time.”
“Can you describe him to
me Kate? You are safe. I will protect you.”
“He wants you too.”
“No, he is trying to help
me!”
“Open up to me Kate.”
“See, I told you he wants
you.”
Chapter
10
“Let me talk to him.”
“What? Why?”
“Kate, listen to me. You are safe.
No one will hurt you anymore. Try
to remember his face. Can you describe
him?”
“He was a fat, balding
old man. He tried to take advantage of
me.”
“What was his name
Kate? Do you know him?”
“Richard Riley.”
“That’s my name
Kate. Try to remember who attacked you.”
“No one attacked me.”
“He might.”
“No! He said I am safe and I trust him not to do
anything.”
“I will not let him
corrupt your mind.”
“Oh Doctor Riley.”
“Yes Kate.”
“You remember don’t
you? It was about twenty years ago. You were a bad man.”
“Kate, try to focus.”
“You remember. You think about it everyday don’t you?”
“Am I still talking to
Kate?” Riley asked.
“Pay attention old
man. You know what you did. You could have helped them but you
didn’t. You were so confident about your
decision, but as you get older you doubt yourself more everyday.”
“Kate, I want you to
start waking up, slowly.”
“She can hear you but she
is not going to wake up. I want you to
close your eyes and picture them. How
old would they be today?
“Stop it,” Riley
demanded.
“Think about what you did,
good doctor.”
“I tried to help them.”
“Leave him alone.”
“I wish you could see his
face.”
“You did not try very
hard.”
“I wanted to help but…”
“Keep your eyes closed
Kate. No need for you to see what is
about to happen to him.”
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